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Re: Municipal Force Daitenzin, 2nd Edition
« Reply #15 on: April 01, 2010, 06:42:35 AM »
Release is drawing nearer and nearer with each passing day! I'd like to take this opportunity to share a small piece of our hard work with you all. It is spoiler-free in a similar sense to the pages that Mr. Carl Horn posts.

Please, enjoy.
http://i39.tinypic.com/2lt0g0m.jpg
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Re: Municipal Force Daitenzin, 2nd Edition
« Reply #16 on: April 01, 2010, 03:20:31 PM »
As weird as it may be, this seems relevant, yet at the same time it's a completely off demonstration of what we're actually doing with it... :D

The pages themselves rarely have anything edited in them art wise...
But, yeah... finally getting close to finished, i believe there are only 2 chapters left, the last one which will be a collaboration between Foggle and me, for increased lulz effects...
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Re: Municipal Force Daitenzin, 2nd Edition
« Reply #17 on: April 01, 2010, 04:28:12 PM »
even though it is a nice idea to stop people nicking your hard work....we can't actually see what you've done so far so it just increases the suspense  :il_hahaha:
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Re: Municipal Force Daitenzin, 2nd Edition
« Reply #18 on: April 01, 2010, 08:30:47 PM »
It was just an April Fools joke, lawl.
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Re: Municipal Force Daitenzin, 2nd Edition
« Reply #19 on: April 02, 2010, 05:03:48 AM »
oh, you..!  :sumyembarassed:  :il_hahaha:

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Re: Municipal Force Daitenzin, 2nd Edition
« Reply #20 on: April 04, 2010, 05:42:11 AM »
 :e_embarassed: :elembarassed:  :excel_fall:
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Re: Municipal Force Daitenzin, 2nd Edition
« Reply #21 on: August 20, 2010, 06:00:54 PM »
Hey, new guy here and I was wondering where I would find these at when you were done.

Also, Hail Lord Ilpalazzo :ehail: :lordilvryannoyed:
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Re: Municipal Force Daitenzin, 2nd Edition
« Reply #22 on: August 20, 2010, 07:15:04 PM »
Quote from: PedrosVengeance on August 20, 2010, 06:00:54 PM
Hey, new guy here and I was wondering where I would find these at when you were done.

Also, Hail Lord Ilpalazzo :ehail: :lordilvryannoyed:
Right in this very thread, my good man! Unfortunately, I've had a lot on my plate and Micki! isn't really working on it anymore, so its been taking longer than expected (and it's not even a real translation...), but hopefully you'll enjoy it once I've finished.
Welcome to the forum! :ehail: :g_hail: :elhail: :im_nabeshin: :lordilsmile:
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Re: Municipal Force Daitenzin, 2nd Edition -- IT'S FREAKIN' DONE
« Reply #23 on: February 19, 2011, 03:37:46 PM »
IT'S DONE. YES, DONE AS IN FINISHED AND COMPLETED AND NOT RAW.

Are you ready for this? Of course you're not! Nothing could prepare you for this! NOTHING!

Missions 1-5 and 9 by Foggle!
Missions 6-8 by Micki!!
There's also a Bonus Mission, and I did that one, too!

This is so much better than the original version (which I am embarrassed of) that I can hardly believe it's a remake!

LINKS:
Read it in the Gallery! Uploaded in reverse for your viewing convenience!
Download it from MediaFire!
Download it from MegaUpload!

Table Of Contents!
Mission 1 starts on 003.jpg or Page 5 in the Gallery
Mission 2 starts on 019.jpg or Page 19 in the Gallery
Mission 3 starts on 035.jpg or Page 31 in the Gallery
Mission 4 starts on 051.jpg or Page 46 in the Gallery
Mission 5 starts on 067.jpg or Page 59 in the Gallery
Mission 6 starts on 080a.jpg or Page 73 in the Gallery
Mission 7 starts on 096.jpg or Page 87 in the Gallery
Mission 8 starts on 112.jpg or Page 102 in the Gallery
Mission 9 starts on 128.jpg or Page 118 in the Gallery
Bonus Mission starts on 144.jpg or Page 134 in the Gallery

Stick with it 'cuz it gets a LOT better as it goes along. This was a long time coming, but not a long time in the making. If I remember correctly, Missions 1 and 6 were finished in 2009 and Missions 2, 3, 7, and 8 were finished in 2010. I spent the last two weeks working fairly diligently on Missions 4, 5, and 9, as well as the Bonus one. If you read the first one when I posted it a long time ago, you should read it again, because I changed it to make it funnier and less stupid!

You might want to catch up with the first chapter of the classic Excel-Lency re-write (or the whole thing, if you want!) before reading this. Why? I'm not tellin! Keep in mind that this thing as a whole is far, far wittier than my bit on that ol' one.

The Bonus Mission is... well... remember this? YEAH, BABY!

LET'S ROCK!
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Re: Municipal Force Daitenzin, 2nd Edition -- IT'S FREAKIN' DONE
« Reply #24 on: February 20, 2011, 09:09:22 AM »
Its done....

Oh yes...OH GOD YES!!!

Thank you Foogle and Micki! so much for doing this for everyone :ehail:
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Re: Municipal Force Daitenzin, 2nd Edition -- IT'S FREAKIN' DONE
« Reply #25 on: February 20, 2011, 01:13:08 PM »
I'm on mission 7 atm.

oh my dear god... :il_hahaha:
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Re: Municipal Force Daitenzin, 2nd Edition -- IT'S FREAKIN' DONE
« Reply #26 on: February 21, 2011, 12:09:47 AM »
i forgot this was pron... :elembarassed:

I can't believe you did THIRD Foggle, I totally didn't expect you to do it. After all, it was just a short story I pushed onto you 2 years or so ago. I'm so touched. And belive it or not, you made that story make sense.

Honestly, I don't understand how his doujinshi's make sense even when you'd read it in Japanese. I guess Doujinshi isn't supposed to make sense. They have another.... use don't they.....

This manga makes me wonder if Wantanabe's sadistic personality was predestined by Rikdo. Maybe Wantanabe is meant to be a darker person. But i wonder how things will go when he meets Hyatt again.
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Re: Municipal Force Daitenzin, 2nd Edition -- IT'S FREAKIN' DONE
« Reply #27 on: February 21, 2011, 08:40:13 AM »
Quote from: Randamo on February 21, 2011, 12:09:47 AM
i forgot this was pron... :elembarassed:
We actually cut most of the pr0nz out, too!
Quote from: Randamo on February 21, 2011, 12:09:47 AM
I can't believe you did THIRD Foggle, I totally didn't expect you to do it. After all, it was just a short story I pushed onto you 2 years or so ago. I'm so touched. And belive it or not, you made that story make sense.
I felt bad for saying I would do it and then never completely following through.
Quote from: Randamo on February 21, 2011, 12:09:47 AM
This manga makes me wonder if Wantanabe's sadistic personality was predestined by Rikdo. Maybe Wantanabe is meant to be a darker person. But i wonder how things will go when he meets Hyatt again.
Indeed, Watanabe is a bit of a sadistic asshole in Daitenzin. The Excel Saga version is much more likable (sympathetic, even) until volume 15, at which point he seems to become a parody of his Daitenzin self.

Iwata ain't such a great guy here either. I think he's my favorite Excel Saga character overall, though.

Misaki seems like a very generic character in Daitenzin. Knowing Rikudou, I'm honestly surprised she never gets naked anywhere in the book (barring the title page).

Sumiyoshi appears to be roughly the same, though I'm not sure if he's accented in the original version. Kabapu is Kabapu and Il Palazzo is Il Palazzo, though they aren't in it very much.

I think Excel acts more like she does in the anime than in the manga in Daitenzin. Maybe that's just me.

Not sure who that other character is. A prototype for Ropponmatsu 2, I reckon.

I'm sure you can tell, but Shiouji and Momochi are not actually in Daitenzin. I just thought it would be fun to have Kabapu talk to them on the phone. :)
Quote from: Lord Il on February 20, 2011, 01:13:08 PM
I'm on mission 7 atm.

oh my dear god... :il_hahaha:
I hope that's a good "oh my dear god..."! ;D
Quote from: Turbam!!! on February 20, 2011, 09:09:22 AM
Thank you Foogle and Micki! so much for doing this for everyone :ehail:
:elhail:
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Thank you Foogle and Micki!
:elhappy:
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Thank you Foogle
:elannoyed:
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Foogle
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Re: Municipal Force Daitenzin, 2nd Edition -- IT'S FREAKIN' DONE
« Reply #28 on: February 23, 2011, 07:47:54 AM »
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Foogle
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Sorry Foggle, I'll blame it on my excitedness at the time
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Re: Municipal Force Daitenzin, 2nd Edition -- IT'S FREAKIN' DONE
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