I'm happy you like it, but i do still find it very dull looking...
I already said that the linework has nothing to do with it, she just seems not as energic as she should actually be...
It might be something simple, like a too casual pose, or some part of her that is just a bit off and changes the whole feel...
Maybe her eyes aren't closed tight enough, maybe her mouth isn't as cheerfully open, as her usual 'Hail' uttering...
I can't tell, so next time, i'll use a godamn reference... (i don't like doing that, but for authenticy's sake, it's pretty much required i guess)