Let me know if you want to see the full script (that goes for the girls as well). I cut out all the unimportant parts (read: the parts where you don't appear) to make it easier to find your lines. Also, I wanted to make it so that no one (except myself of course) would know the full script so that everyone would have something they could be surprised by (i.e. the scenes they don't know about).
*puts on ultra director arm band* Besides! If something like this leaked out it would be troublesome if someone stole it!
@Micki!:
I'll see what they look like with the eye shine. I thought that the colored outlines added such a greater dimension to the characters that they didn't even need the little white spots anymore. But you're the artist, so I'll put them in if you want. Also realize that the location of the spot will be mirrored on the other eye. This is due to the technique I am using for the eye, I make one movie clip of the eye, then copy and mirror it for the other eye. Within this movie clip are separate frames where each frame has a different position for the eye (looking left, looking right, angry, etc.) and then I tell flash to display a specific frame of the eye at any given moment (the same technique is being applied to the mouth and the hands). But anyways, I'll post some pics later.