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Re: Uncreativity loev fanfic
« Reply #45 on: October 06, 2007, 07:43:15 PM »
Just finished reading rape and it was a fairly good story, well written but you seemed to have ended it to fast. I dont think Il Palazzo would just kick Excel out I mean after that talk with Kabapu? He would also still care about his own kid...
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Re: Uncreativity loev fanfic
« Reply #46 on: October 06, 2007, 08:23:27 PM »
Quote from: skycloud117 on October 06, 2007, 07:43:15 PM
Just finished reading rape and it was a fairly good story, well written but you seemed to have ended it to fast. I dont think Il Palazzo would just kick Excel out I mean after that talk with Kabapu? He would also still care about his own kid...

I figure he's just throwing a temper tantrum and they'll reconcile later, but I knew if I let myself write it, I'd end up wanting to do it all cute and squishy, and I'm not good at writing that sort of thing.
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Re: Uncreativity loev fanfic
« Reply #47 on: October 06, 2007, 08:44:57 PM »
Well you can pull a ep. 25 and make it work out without it being squishy remember its your world and u can control it and shape it as u please!
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Re: Uncreativity loev fanfic
« Reply #48 on: October 06, 2007, 09:57:08 PM »
Aww, 25 was squishy in its own way...

I know I have authorial control and all, but I get a little embarrassed about writing things with actual emotions. Silly, but true! I'm going to try to do a better job of that in Dianetics Another Day.  :ehail:
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Re: Uncreativity loev fanfic
« Reply #49 on: October 07, 2007, 07:16:15 PM »
To make up for being so slow with the last chapter, I have the next chapter!

Chapter 7: Practically Clear

This chapter ran long, so I decided to split it into two. Hopefully I'll have the next one done soon, too!

I also don't know why I decided to do chapter titles... I really hate having to think of a new one every chapter, haha.  :lordilvryannoyed:
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Re: Uncreativity loev fanfic
« Reply #50 on: November 08, 2007, 11:24:13 PM »
Chapter 8: Kind of Cool

Finally, the next chapter is done! I wish I could say the next chapter will be done faster, but I'm getting to that point where I have to start actually planning things so the fic can like... end. (By the way, my current estimate of final fic length is somewhere around 15 chapters, which probably means it'll be more like 20.)

IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!

EXCEL VS WATANABE! "Get a life, you creep!"  :e_angry:

IL PALAZZO VS IL PALAZZO! "Conquest is my one desire..."  :lordilannoyed:

SHIOUJI VS TOM CRUISE! "I don't care if you're in the closet, but did you have to take my mother in with you?" :icon_frown:
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Re: Uncreativity loev fanfic
« Reply #51 on: November 09, 2007, 02:34:12 AM »
It's cool yet again :D
I hope Iwata will soon get on his feet again...
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Re: Uncreativity loev fanfic
« Reply #52 on: November 09, 2007, 05:09:28 AM »
Epic chapter is epic.  I have lulz'd a lot through your entire fanfic. :im_nabeshin:
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Re: Uncreativity loev fanfic
« Reply #53 on: November 09, 2007, 09:06:43 AM »
Thanks, guys! ?

It'll probably be a couple more chapters before Iwata actually gets to do anything, but he'll be fixed in the next chapter! I'm starting to miss him too.
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Re: Uncreativity loev fanfic
« Reply #54 on: November 27, 2007, 08:17:48 PM »
Chapter 9: Party at the Shioujis' II: There Actually is a Party This Time

It might be awhile before I get the next chapter done, because I'm not entirely sure what actually happens in it, hahaha.

IN THE NEXT CHAPTER (maybe):

Excel's faces her bizarre and tragic past!  :e_pleased:

Il Palazzo goes up against his own worst enemy... himself!  :lordil:

And Hyatt may even actually show up briefly!  :h_embarassed:
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Re: Uncreativity loev fanfic
« Reply #55 on: November 28, 2007, 01:48:10 PM »
I approve yet again, i liked it :D

I like that it leaves you hanging in the end, as you'd expect in such a story...
I look forward to the next chapter, go and take your time with the plot, to make it as good as you can..!
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Re: Uncreativity loev fanfic
« Reply #56 on: November 28, 2007, 02:58:50 PM »
Great work, as always. :im_nabeshin:

Keep it up. ;D
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Re: Uncreativity loev fanfic
« Reply #57 on: December 14, 2007, 10:22:43 PM »
I've been pretty frustrated with my writing in chapter 10, so I think I'm gonna do it in comic form! So now the question is, do you guys wanna wait til i have all the pages done, or should I post them one at a time?
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Re: Uncreativity loev fanfic
« Reply #58 on: December 15, 2007, 03:23:52 AM »
I'd prefer all at once... even if it takes some time... Because i like one big good read...

Reading it partly, only makes the fun-factor between each page fade away, because of the time to wait for the next page...

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Re: Uncreativity loev fanfic
« Reply #59 on: December 17, 2007, 09:12:14 PM »
Roger! I'll put it up when it's done, then.

I was worried it would take forever, but I already have nearly four pages done. It probably helps that I'm drawing them at work, haha...  :lordilsmile:
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