my music!

[Squeezit]

i play guitar, but i also do other stuff.
this is my other stuff, i like my song Dark Rhapture as my favorite personally



www.myspace.com/stufffandthings

[Poey]

Very cool... very explosive. I liked that last one.

[Squeezit]

thank you

( i had fun names )

[Squeezit]

alright, so i wrote another song and added it to my myspace, so please do check it out
the new song is titled "untitled again"

[Poey]

Very cool. May I make a suggestion?

Right now it sounds like a soundtrack song for a show or movie (which may be what you were going for), and a cool one at that. However I think this new track has some great potential to take the listener somewhere else. Maybe build/reduce dynamically more (you did some, and you change sounds often), or introduce new musical themes as well and take it somewhere else. Then you can either end there or bring this theme back.

Sounds great keep it up!

[Lord Il]

Your latest was pretty good.

For some reason I was left wanting some slightly stronger percussion though. That's all really.

[Squeezit]

thank you both so much for your opinions. and to answer your question, Poey. Not quite sure what im lookin for, im mainly attempting to avoid boring renditions that are in most technos. and by that i mean they are too damn repetative. mind you i dont know if you would really consider my stuff techno. ill keep making more when i have time and keep you updated, i appreciate the advice and the compliments! I only wish more people on this forum would look at this thread.  i cant wait to make another!

[Squeezit]

sorry for double posting but the psp wouldnt let me type more. anyway, all of you are welcome to add my myspace account. who knows maybe i can get some fans, lmao.     

[Squeezit]

I've Written another one!!!
it even has a real title!
YES!
please take a look again
I love your comments (even though it's mostly Poey )

[Lord Il]

lol! "A Real Title"
Well, it IS a title.

I used to listen to a lot of industrial in the early-ish 90's. This kind of reminded me of that.
Good industrial type feel to it.

[Squeezit]

thank you ^^
Sadly i wasnt able to do what i wanted with it
maybe one day i'll have enough money to buy some sort of connector to plug my guitar into the computer and just play the guitar and do the rest with a program.  I would like to be able to do that. It would be a one man show =D
besides that way i dont have stupid confusing programs not letting me make sounds that i want to make D=<

[Poey]

Woah. That was very very cool. The only problem I have is the recording/production (some of the sounds are sorta "canned-ham" to me, as I don't listen to a lot of that kinda techno-industrial stuff --but you can really only do so much with general at-home equipment).

So was that you playing guitar+bass or was that a program?

[Squeezit]

ah the reason i wasnt able to do what i wanted with it is because its a program.
When i have the tools I hope to be able to put my own guitar in my music.  Right now that all costs money, and since i left my car in Minnesota, a car is my first priority >_<
music comes second >_<
although if it wasnt so cold, i would buy a motorcycle, so much cheaper. but i hate cold weather D:

If I'm able to put my own guitar into my music, thats when i'll become more serious and do this music more avidly.  Constantly trying to improve my work, of course

[Squeezit]

aaaand i wrote another one.
by the time you go to take a look (if you do,) it'll be called Amdis probably.
Myspace is being slow and wont rename it.
if it still hasnt renamed it then its' called  "someone special name this"

[evil_dead]

I love what you're doing here, I'd love to see it as a soundtrack in something. Usually when I here great sounds like these they're ruined when vocal's start up and the same stupid voice sings about death and sorrow. +A.