Oekaki

[exceluuu]

3 hours in MS Paint. No lie. Well, actually, I did it on an oekaki program, but it really did take three hours.

This was my third edit, too. The first attempt was horrible, but the basic outline was used as this when I went back and fixed it. The eyes looked like they belonged on a hypnotoad. So, comments, critique, any suggestions?

[skycloud]

I like it, the words around it dont really fit with it though nice shading along the hair and I like how much detail the hair in general has. She is a little pale though and the eyes are a little off. Could always go with the classic -.- eyes, but those dont really fit the pose she has. But anyways I like it 7/10

[MincyMatsu]

I think it's pretty... Although, the eyes do look a little off...
For further projects (or edits) you may want to use a less pink skin color...

[exceluuu]

I added the words just because it seemed a little empty and I didn't feel like bothering with a background. As for the eyes, they're not perfect, but they're a sight better than the original version's. Actually, I thought the skin color fit pretty well, even though I kind of have to tilt my laptop at a certain angle to make out the shading on the skin. Though, the more I look at it, the more I feel it should have been darker and more tan. Either way, though, it turned out better than I expected for my 1.5st try.

[skycloud]

Hmm could have added Menchi on her right shoulder to fill in the blank area and Woot! I am unemployed now! (no more newbie!)

[exceluuu]

D: I did say this was the first time I drew Excel, right? Maybe if you saw the original pic you'd know why this took 3 hours to fix and why I wouldn't even bother to TRY and draw a non-human creature I haven't actually studied obsessively.