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Ye Old Pub => Creativity => Topic started by: Foggle on August 14, 2009, 02:26:53 PM
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IT'S DONE. YES, DONE AS IN FINISHED AND COMPLETED AND NOT RAW.
Are you ready for this? Of course you're not! Nothing could prepare you for this! NOTHING!
Missions 1-5 and 9 by Foggle!
Missions 6-8 by Micki!!
There's also a Bonus Mission, and I did that one, too!
This is so much better than the original version (which I am embarrassed of) that I can hardly believe it's a remake!
LINKS:
Read it in the Gallery! (http://www.excelsagaforum.com/index.php?action=gallery;cat=5) Uploaded in reverse for your viewing convenience!
Download it from MediaFire! (http://www.mediafire.com/?fjb30p4y5hellv8)
Download it from MegaUpload! (http://www.megaupload.com/?d=UWOBIYMU)
Table Of Contents! (http://www.excelsagaforum.com/index.php?action=gallery;sa=view;id=434)
Mission 1 starts on 003.jpg or Page 5 in the Gallery
Mission 2 starts on 019.jpg or Page 19 in the Gallery
Mission 3 starts on 035.jpg or Page 31 in the Gallery
Mission 4 starts on 051.jpg or Page 46 in the Gallery
Mission 5 starts on 067.jpg or Page 59 in the Gallery
Mission 6 starts on 080a.jpg or Page 73 in the Gallery
Mission 7 starts on 096.jpg or Page 87 in the Gallery
Mission 8 starts on 112.jpg or Page 102 in the Gallery
Mission 9 starts on 128.jpg or Page 118 in the Gallery
Bonus Mission starts on 144.jpg or Page 134 in the Gallery
Stick with it 'cuz it gets a LOT better as it goes along. This was a long time coming, but not a long time in the making. If I remember correctly, Missions 1 and 6 were finished in 2009 and Missions 2, 3, 7, and 8 were finished in 2010. I spent the last two weeks working fairly diligently on Missions 4, 5, and 9, as well as the Bonus one. If you read the first one when I posted it a long time ago, you should read it again, because I changed it to make it funnier and less stupid!
You might want to catch up with the first chapter of the classic Excel-Lency re-write (or the whole thing, if you want!) before reading this. Why? I'm not tellin! Keep in mind that this thing as a whole is far, far wittier than my bit on that ol' one.
The Bonus Mission is... well... remember this? (http://www.excelsagaforum.com/index.php?topic=1007.0) YEAH, BABY!
LET'S ROCK!
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Awesome, looking forward to see the rest of it :D
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I love your 'bastardisations', im loading it up!
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-applause- So funny. I can't wait until the next chapter!
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Thanks, everyone! I'm working on Chapter 2 and Micki! is working on Chapter 7 right now. ;D
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I thought it was chapter 6 O_o
Not that it matters much... I hope i am able to gain some laughs from my chapter \o/
I'm like halfway done with it...
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I was wrong, it's actually the 7th one. It's numbered as the sixth in "canon," because the first one is chapter 0. But fuck that shit, it makes no sense. :P
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I'm done with my chapter... I guess it's only appropriate to wait till the first couple of chapters are done before i upload it here...
In the mean time i would like you te review it, Foggle :o
Just to make sure the chapters are named correctly, and so you can compile it with the full set of the series later once all are done being re-written...
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Please disregard the Table of Contents in the Chapter 1 download... It will look different in the finished version.
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This is pretty awesome. Will you be doing just the chapters from this edition, or any of the others from the latest edition?
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Micki! and I finished up two more chapters today. That's right, we're actually back to working on this thing again!
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it's not much yet, but it'll be done, and i promise that they'll give you guys a bunch of smiles, laughs, or at least giggles, or perhaps even frowns of incredible regret from reading them...
I have finished two chapters so far, and will work on a third one, hopefully a 4'th after that too... I REALLY enjoy writing these, even when it takes forever to finish it... :D My English might not be the best, but i'm trying hard to have the characters stay in character, with a little twist to fit the theme...
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Why'd you have to ruin it by censoring the good stuff, Foggle? Jeez... :il_hahaha:
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It would be interesting to release an uncut edition >_>
But the main reason was to make it available to (almost) everyone on our forum, and outside it...
But i dunno, i wouldn't object on working on the the more juicy pages :il_hahaha:
this thing isn't far from finished btw, i finished a total of 3 chapters by now, two chapters were finished in a row, and foggle just finished chapter 2..!
If we keep up the pace like this, we might just end up being done with the whole thing by next month..! :D
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Can't wait to see what you've done. :ehail:
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Release is drawing nearer and nearer with each passing day! I'd like to take this opportunity to share a small piece of our hard work with you all. It is spoiler-free in a similar sense to the pages that Mr. Carl Horn posts.
Please, enjoy.
http://i39.tinypic.com/2lt0g0m.jpg (http://i39.tinypic.com/2lt0g0m.jpg)
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As weird as it may be, this seems relevant, yet at the same time it's a completely off demonstration of what we're actually doing with it... :D
The pages themselves rarely have anything edited in them art wise...
But, yeah... finally getting close to finished, i believe there are only 2 chapters left, the last one which will be a collaboration between Foggle and me, for increased lulz effects...
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even though it is a nice idea to stop people nicking your hard work....we can't actually see what you've done so far so it just increases the suspense :il_hahaha:
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It was just an April Fools joke, lawl.
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oh, you..! :sumyembarassed: :il_hahaha:
:excel_fall:
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:e_embarassed: :elembarassed: :excel_fall:
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Hey, new guy here and I was wondering where I would find these at when you were done.
Also, Hail Lord Ilpalazzo :ehail: :lordilvryannoyed:
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Hey, new guy here and I was wondering where I would find these at when you were done.
Also, Hail Lord Ilpalazzo :ehail: :lordilvryannoyed:
Right in this very thread, my good man! Unfortunately, I've had a lot on my plate and Micki! isn't really working on it anymore, so its been taking longer than expected (and it's not even a real translation...), but hopefully you'll enjoy it once I've finished.
Welcome to the forum! :ehail: :g_hail: :elhail: :im_nabeshin: :lordilsmile:
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IT'S DONE. YES, DONE AS IN FINISHED AND COMPLETED AND NOT RAW.
Are you ready for this? Of course you're not! Nothing could prepare you for this! NOTHING!
Missions 1-5 and 9 by Foggle!
Missions 6-8 by Micki!!
There's also a Bonus Mission, and I did that one, too!
This is so much better than the original version (which I am embarrassed of) that I can hardly believe it's a remake!
LINKS:
Read it in the Gallery! (http://www.excelsagaforum.com/index.php?action=gallery;cat=5) Uploaded in reverse for your viewing convenience!
Download it from MediaFire! (http://www.mediafire.com/?fjb30p4y5hellv8)
Download it from MegaUpload! (http://www.megaupload.com/?d=UWOBIYMU)
Table Of Contents! (http://www.excelsagaforum.com/index.php?action=gallery;sa=view;id=434)
Mission 1 starts on 003.jpg or Page 5 in the Gallery
Mission 2 starts on 019.jpg or Page 19 in the Gallery
Mission 3 starts on 035.jpg or Page 31 in the Gallery
Mission 4 starts on 051.jpg or Page 46 in the Gallery
Mission 5 starts on 067.jpg or Page 59 in the Gallery
Mission 6 starts on 080a.jpg or Page 73 in the Gallery
Mission 7 starts on 096.jpg or Page 87 in the Gallery
Mission 8 starts on 112.jpg or Page 102 in the Gallery
Mission 9 starts on 128.jpg or Page 118 in the Gallery
Bonus Mission starts on 144.jpg or Page 134 in the Gallery
Stick with it 'cuz it gets a LOT better as it goes along. This was a long time coming, but not a long time in the making. If I remember correctly, Missions 1 and 6 were finished in 2009 and Missions 2, 3, 7, and 8 were finished in 2010. I spent the last two weeks working fairly diligently on Missions 4, 5, and 9, as well as the Bonus one. If you read the first one when I posted it a long time ago, you should read it again, because I changed it to make it funnier and less stupid!
You might want to catch up with the first chapter of the classic Excel-Lency re-write (or the whole thing, if you want!) before reading this. Why? I'm not tellin! Keep in mind that this thing as a whole is far, far wittier than my bit on that ol' one.
The Bonus Mission is... well... remember this? (http://www.excelsagaforum.com/index.php?topic=1007.0) YEAH, BABY!
LET'S ROCK!
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Its done....
Oh yes...OH GOD YES!!!
Thank you Foogle and Micki! so much for doing this for everyone :ehail:
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I'm on mission 7 atm.
oh my dear god... :il_hahaha:
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i forgot this was pron... :elembarassed:
I can't believe you did THIRD Foggle, I totally didn't expect you to do it. After all, it was just a short story I pushed onto you 2 years or so ago. I'm so touched. And belive it or not, you made that story make sense.
Honestly, I don't understand how his doujinshi's make sense even when you'd read it in Japanese. I guess Doujinshi isn't supposed to make sense. They have another.... use don't they.....
This manga makes me wonder if Wantanabe's sadistic personality was predestined by Rikdo. Maybe Wantanabe is meant to be a darker person. But i wonder how things will go when he meets Hyatt again.
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i forgot this was pron... :elembarassed:
We actually cut most of the pr0nz out, too!
I can't believe you did THIRD Foggle, I totally didn't expect you to do it. After all, it was just a short story I pushed onto you 2 years or so ago. I'm so touched. And belive it or not, you made that story make sense.
I felt bad for saying I would do it and then never completely following through.
This manga makes me wonder if Wantanabe's sadistic personality was predestined by Rikdo. Maybe Wantanabe is meant to be a darker person. But i wonder how things will go when he meets Hyatt again.
Indeed, Watanabe is a bit of a sadistic asshole in Daitenzin. The Excel Saga version is much more likable (sympathetic, even) until volume 15, at which point he seems to become a parody of his Daitenzin self.
Iwata ain't such a great guy here either. I think he's my favorite Excel Saga character overall, though.
Misaki seems like a very generic character in Daitenzin. Knowing Rikudou, I'm honestly surprised she never gets naked anywhere in the book (barring the title page).
Sumiyoshi appears to be roughly the same, though I'm not sure if he's accented in the original version. Kabapu is Kabapu and Il Palazzo is Il Palazzo, though they aren't in it very much.
I think Excel acts more like she does in the anime than in the manga in Daitenzin. Maybe that's just me.
Not sure who that other character is. A prototype for Ropponmatsu 2, I reckon.
I'm sure you can tell, but Shiouji and Momochi are not actually in Daitenzin. I just thought it would be fun to have Kabapu talk to them on the phone. :)
I'm on mission 7 atm.
oh my dear god... :il_hahaha:
I hope that's a good "oh my dear god..."! ;D
Thank you Foogle and Micki! so much for doing this for everyone :ehail:
:elhail:
Thank you Foogle and Micki!
:elhappy:
Thank you Foogle
:elannoyed:
Foogle
:elcry:
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Foogle
:elcry:
(http://oi51.tinypic.com/16jo9ja.jpg)
Sorry Foggle, I'll blame it on my excitedness at the time
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(http://i55.tinypic.com/312ztc5.png)
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This thread deserves more recognition, man !!!
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This thread deserves more recognition, man !!!
*high-five*
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*highfiveback*
I'm so proud of our baby *sniff*
People should post thier favorite pages or panels, and encourage us to do more if they can endure the stupidity more clever writing..!
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I love this one.
(http://i50.tinypic.com/ipv9fp.jpg)
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:D
I love this one, it reminded me of my bird story..!
(http://oi49.tinypic.com/5zib9h.jpg)
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Man I bought this thing in Japanese, I didn't know there was a scanlated version here.
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There isn't, we made up our own translation of it, not knowing a single thing of what's going on, we roughly wrote our own interpretation of whatever we thought might be going on in them, also removing most of the explicit scenes..!
It was fun trying to make sense of it though... I am using the word "sense" loosely though, REALLY loosely :il_hahaha:
My dear, dear rope, show me your dance again <3
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Ah okay, so it's not even a rough translation, it's just random text.
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I wouldn't call it entirely random, at least within context we try to make sense of what is seemingly going on, we had good fun doing this..!
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I wouldn't call it entirely random, at least within context we try to make sense of what is seemingly going on, we had good fun doing this..!
ARE YOU ALIVE? :hdead:
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Yessssss..! :g_hail:
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Another random panel that I loved:
(http://oi50.tinypic.com/b3v4nr.jpg)
:kabapu-1:
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Look, a page of what we're working on now, it's not all random, not at all..!
This here is though, random, like totally random...
(http://i.imgur.com/ovRrul.jpg) (http://i.imgur.com/ovRru.jpg)
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Of course, a giant penguin. What else could it possibly be? lmao!
Seriously... I don't know what it could possibly be anyways. haha!!
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Hello people that might still be alive in this forum, is the daitenzin translation available anywhere anymore? Or has it become lost media?
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Hello people that might still be alive in this forum, is the daitenzin translation available anywhere anymore? Or has it become lost media?
Sorry for the super duper late response! There is no legitimate Daitenzin translation yet as far as I know, the thing mentioned in this thread was just a shitpost rewrite made by Mincy and myself. We do hope to eventually release a *real* TL though!